Menu

Blog posts

Nurse Anesthesia Masters, Small Class Size

I hope to be accepted to your especially distinguished and competitive Nurse Anesthesia Program at the University of XXXX because I am attracted to the small class size and the high first time as well as overall pass rate for the National Certification Examination. I feel that I am a strong candidat…

Read more

DNP Psychiatric Nursing, PTSD, Schizophrenia

Originally from India, I am a nurse who has been making her home here in America since 2004, coming to the USA as a result of my marriage. I now have a strong clinical background in psychiatric nursing working with all age groups of patients for the past 7 years. For the past 3 years, I have been wo…

Read more

DNP Nurse Anesthesia, East European

XXXX University is my first choice to earn the DNP in Nurse Anesthesia for several reasons, the location is convenient for my family and I also very much appreciate the rigors of your program, along with the vast breadth and scope of the curriculum. Now a highly skilled and experienced critical care…

Read more

MECN, Masters Entry Clinical, Gerontology, Latina

I see my degree in Sociology as most beneficial to someone who has chosen nursing as their career, enabling me to see the big picture with greater clarity from the beginning, understanding the complexities of diversity and social justice issues as they play out in the nursing profession. Serving as …

Read more

DNP, Long Distance Runner, Africa, Kenyan

I now feel strongly that I am at my optimal moment to begin study towards the DNP Degree and prepare myself for the fullest possible contribution to my society as a nursing professional. Originally from Africa, I like to think that my aspirations represent the hopes and dreams of nurses from Africa …

Read more

Psychiatric Mental Health Nurse Practitioner

I could not be happier in my choice of nursing as a career or more enthused at the prospect of beginning graduate school next year and advancing professionally. I also feel fortunate to be living in such exciting times for Nurse Practitioners, as they gradually move towards greater parity with medic…

Read more

DNP Program, Russian Woman Immigrant

A woman from the Ural Mountains of Russia who came to America at the age of 20, I married, and made my permanent home at XXXX where I am now raising my children as a divorced mom. Now 39 and in my last year of your BSN program and XXXX University, I hope to continue at XXU to earn my DNP Degree. XXU…

Read more

MSN, Latina, Mexican Border Issues

A very hard-working Latina nurse who was born and raised along the Rio Grande River a half-hour south of El Paso, Texas, I am fully bilingual and bicultural and a very hard worker. I look to your distinguished MSN Program at the University of XXXX to guide me in becoming the most effective and compa…

Read more

MSN FNP, Missions to Haiti

I am applying to your distinguished Masters Program in Nursing at XXXX University because my relationship with my patient stands at the center of my world; helping all of them to make daily progress in the healing process is my personal triumph. It is not infrequent that one of my patients has tears…

Read more

Letter of Intent CRNA, Learning Disability

Probably the most unique aspect of my application to your distinguished and competitive program in Nurse Anesthesia at the University of XXXX is the fact that I was diagnosed with a learning disability as a child; yet, I went on to graduate from nursing school with honors. I have managed to accompli…

Read more

MS Master´s Clinical Nurse Program, Indian Applicant

A  hard  working  woman  who  was  born  and  raised  in  India, I have now  been living  in the United  States  for the  past  ten  years. I moved to the U.S. in 2002 after marrying a U.S. citizen and have been living with my in-laws since that time. I am now the  mother  of   two  beautiful  boys,…

Read more

BSN-to-DNP Degree, Family Nurse Practitioner

My response to entering middle age has been to advance in my career. I look forward to contributing to the lovely diversity of your program at XXU as a woman who was born and raised in Iran; while I will always be Persian, however, I have been here so long that I already feel Oklahomian. I became an…

Read more

Masters, CRNA Nurse Anesthesia, Husband and Father

I would feel profoundly honored to complete my Masters Degree in Nurse Anesthesia at XXXX College’s highly respected program. I am applying to your program primarily out of respect and admiration for your central goal of creating student-centered partnerships with clinical sites. Another factor is t…

Read more

WHNP Women’s Health Nurse Practitioner, Filipina

I had a really good time in nursing school in general; but nothing else excited me as much as my course in women’s health. This is why I have my sights set on becoming a distinguished WHNP and I hope to perform all of my clinical work in this area. I have complete confidence in the distinguished fac…

Read more

Masters FNP Letter of Intent, Hospice, Spirituality

Your distinguished MSN Program at XXXX University is my first choice for graduate study to become a nurse practitioner because I want very much to attend a school with a solid spiritual foundation and ethos. My dedication to nursing as a spiritual activity, healing and care as an expression of love …

Read more

MSN Masters, Military Nurse, FNP Healthcare Mgmt

I am applying to your distinguished program at XXXX University because I see it as the best fit for my high level of motivation and extensive professional responsibility. I also feel strongly that my personal nursing philosophy is well aligned with the mission of your program with respect to diversi…

Read more

Nursing Masters, CRNA, Devout Catholic Man

XXXX University is my first choice for graduate study because I am not only a devout Catholic but also a fervent admirer of the Jesuit tradition. I am convinced that the election of history’s first Jesuit pope will help us to usher in novel and creative advances from a Catholic perspective on the ma…

Read more

MSN Online Nursing and Health Studies, Missions

XXXX University is my first choice for graduate study not only because it is the finest MSN program available online, but also because of your Jesuit philosophy and tradition of placing those who most need our help as our highest priority. There is nothing that I am as proud of as I am my 6 trips to…

Read more

DNP Africa, Immigrant Applicant, Cameroon

 1.) I am applying to the University of XXXX because I am convinced that your program is the finest DNP program available for an applicant with my specific interests and focus: on Africa. In my humble opinion, the greatest weakness of my application to your program is my age; I am 52. Nevertheless, …

Read more

MSN, Clinical Care Extender, Arabic Woman

Just like my mother, I am an Arab woman, despite the fact that I have been in California my entire life. Thus, I look forward to contributing to the diversity of your distinguished program in nursing as a near-native speaker of Arabic as well as a young woman who is most passionate about and fully e…

Read more

20 blog posts

Letters of Intent for Nursing School: Doctoral, Masters, Certificate

All of the Statement samples on this web site were written more than 2 years ago and have only been published anonymously

 

 drrobertedinger@gmail.com

 

Up to 1000 words: US$199  

 

Skype: DrRobertEdinger

 

Let's be friends on Facebook!

 

Working together as a team we strive to create the best personal statement possible, to give you an advantage over other applicants to Nursing School. I am an experienced professional who has read and edited thousands of  Personal Statements and Statements of Purpose. Most editing services only focus on the technical aspects of the statements: grammar, spelling, and punctuation. Instead, I consider the more important aspects; personal tone, flow, and content. Most importantly, I help you express your creative ideas with respect to your long term goals and your contribution to humanity and society. The final product of my editing may be the beginning of your professional success, a solid investment in your future.