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Nurse Anesthesia Masters, Small Class Size

I hope to be accepted to your especially distinguished and competitive Nurse Anesthesia Program at the University of XXXX because I am attracted to the small class size and the high first time as well as overall pass rate for the National Certification Examination. I feel that I am a strong candidat…

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DNP Psychiatric Nursing, PTSD, Schizophrenia

Originally from India, I am a nurse who has been making her home here in America since 2004, coming to the USA as a result of my marriage. I now have a strong clinical background in psychiatric nursing working with all age groups of patients for the past 7 years. For the past 3 years, I have been wo…

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DNP Nurse Anesthesia, East European

XXXX University is my first choice to earn the DNP in Nurse Anesthesia for several reasons, the location is convenient for my family and I also very much appreciate the rigors of your program, along with the vast breadth and scope of the curriculum. Now a highly skilled and experienced critical care…

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MECN, Masters Entry Clinical, Gerontology, Latina

I see my degree in Sociology as most beneficial to someone who has chosen nursing as their career, enabling me to see the big picture with greater clarity from the beginning, understanding the complexities of diversity and social justice issues as they play out in the nursing profession. Serving as …

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DNP, Long Distance Runner, Africa, Kenyan

I now feel strongly that I am at my optimal moment to begin study towards the DNP Degree and prepare myself for the fullest possible contribution to my society as a nursing professional. Originally from Africa, I like to think that my aspirations represent the hopes and dreams of nurses from Africa …

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Psychiatric Mental Health Nurse Practitioner

I could not be happier in my choice of nursing as a career or more enthused at the prospect of beginning graduate school next year and advancing professionally. I also feel fortunate to be living in such exciting times for Nurse Practitioners, as they gradually move towards greater parity with medic…

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DNP Program, Russian Woman Immigrant

A woman from the Ural Mountains of Russia who came to America at the age of 20, I married, and made my permanent home at XXXX where I am now raising my children as a divorced mom. Now 39 and in my last year of your BSN program and XXXX University, I hope to continue at XXU to earn my DNP Degree. XXU…

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Entry Level MSN Program, Russian, Armenian

Why XXXX University: I want very much to become a nurse and to build my career in nursing; yet, my undergraduate degree is in Public Health, a closely related field that, in fact,  has served to inspire me to a career in nursing. My current internship as a Nurse’s Assistant has also served to make m…

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MSN, Latina, Mexican Border Issues

A very hard-working Latina nurse who was born and raised along the Rio Grande River a half-hour south of El Paso, Texas, I am fully bilingual and bicultural and a very hard worker. I look to your distinguished MSN Program at the University of XXXX to guide me in becoming the most effective and compa…

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MSN FNP, Missions to Haiti

I am applying to your distinguished Masters Program in Nursing at XXXX University because my relationship with my patient stands at the center of my world; helping all of them to make daily progress in the healing process is my personal triumph. It is not infrequent that one of my patients has tears…

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Letter of Intent CRNA, Learning Disability

Probably the most unique aspect of my application to your distinguished and competitive program in Nurse Anesthesia at the University of XXXX is the fact that I was diagnosed with a learning disability as a child; yet, I went on to graduate from nursing school with honors. I have managed to accompli…

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MS Degree Program Nursing, Latino Community Nurse

The greatest strength of my application to your especially distinguished Masters Program in Nursing at the University of XXXX is undoubtedly the fact that I am not only a nurse, but that I am also fully bilingual and bicultural. I am a Mexican woman who is most fully dedicated to addressing the nurs…

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Undergraduate Nursing, BSN Degree, Career Change

Your especially distinguished nursing program at XXXX is my first choice for study towards the BSN degree for a variety of reasons, particularly your explicit focus on diverse student populations, which attracts me as Korean woman who adores diversity. At 32 years old, the decision to become a nurse…

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Entry Level MSN Program, Public Health, FNP

Why XXXX University: I want very much to become a nurse and to build my career in nursing; yet, my undergraduate degree is in Public Health, a closely related field that, in fact,  has served to inspire me to a career in nursing. My current internship as a Nurse’s Assistant has also served to make …

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DNP Studies, Psychiatric, Crisis Intervention

My goal for DNP studies at XXXX University is to be the finest DNP possible. I am currently serving as an RN on a psychiatric unit working with patients in acute crisis. Raised in a family of humanistic and holistic healers, the daughter of a nurse educator, and the sister of a nurse midwife—my fat…

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Doctor of Nursing Practice, Nurse Anesthesia DNP-NA

Having completed an undergraduate degree in Flute Performance, I like to think that my background in music has helped me to cultivate creativity, dedication, perseverance, and to learn to prioritize at an early age—all qualities that have been instrumental so far to my success in nursing. Adaptable,…

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MSN Psychiatric Mental Health, Dementia, Depression

I was not looking forward to a rotation in a locked psychiatric ward during my BSN training, it was merely something to be endured in order to reach my goal of becoming a midwife.  I found the ward to be a disturbing environment but was filled with sympathy for the patients and curious about them as…

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MS Master´s Clinical Nurse Program, Indian Applicant

A  hard  working  woman  who  was  born  and  raised  in  India, I have now  been living  in the United  States  for the  past  ten  years. I moved to the U.S. in 2002 after marrying a U.S. citizen and have been living with my in-laws since that time. I am now the  mother  of   two  beautiful  boys,…

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CRNA Masters, Korean-American, Army

 I feel that one of the greatest benefits of being a professional nurse is the gratification that comes from easing the suffering of others. I have focused on anesthesia because I want to devote the balance of my professional life to this cause. I am a US Army Captain and serving my country is my f…

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MSN Masters, FNP, Haiti Earthquake Volunteer

My intellectual, professional, and clinical interests are all a result of my intense passion for nursing, especially nursing education. I earned my AS Degree in Nursing in 2002 and just finished my BSN. I am especially highly motivated because of my fascination with research, in particular, the agin…

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