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GMSN Non-Traditional, Hospice, World Traveler

XXU is my first choice to study towards the MSN because I love the progressive aspects of your curriculum which mirror the creativity and sense of promise in diversity and humanity that generally characterizes the Bay Area. My academic work ethic is high as is demonstrated by my undergrad GPA of 3.7…

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PHD Doctor of Public Health Nursing, African

I am currently finishing up my Master’s Degree in our Nurse Practitioner Program at XXXX University. I have a special emphasis in my studies on adults, most particularly our geriatric population. My compassion for my patients, and the older they are the more that I love them, is matched only by my a…

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BSN-to-DNP Degree, Family Nurse Practitioner

My response to entering middle age has been to advance in my career. I look forward to contributing to the lovely diversity of your program at XXU as a woman who was born and raised in Iran; while I will always be Persian, however, I have been here so long that I already feel Oklahomian. I became an…

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Masters, CRNA Nurse Anesthesia, Husband and Father

I would feel profoundly honored to complete my Masters Degree in Nurse Anesthesia at XXXX College’s highly respected program. I am applying to your program primarily out of respect and admiration for your central goal of creating student-centered partnerships with clinical sites. Another factor is t…

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WHNP Women’s Health Nurse Practitioner, Filipina

I had a really good time in nursing school in general; but nothing else excited me as much as my course in women’s health. This is why I have my sights set on becoming a distinguished WHNP and I hope to perform all of my clinical work in this area. I have complete confidence in the distinguished fac…

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Masters FNP Letter of Intent, Hospice, Spirituality

Your distinguished MSN Program at XXXX University is my first choice for graduate study to become a nurse practitioner because I want very much to attend a school with a solid spiritual foundation and ethos. My dedication to nursing as a spiritual activity, healing and care as an expression of love …

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MSN Masters, Military Nurse, FNP Healthcare Mgmt

I am applying to your distinguished program at XXXX University because I see it as the best fit for my high level of motivation and extensive professional responsibility. I also feel strongly that my personal nursing philosophy is well aligned with the mission of your program with respect to diversi…

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Nursing Masters, CRNA, Devout Catholic Man

XXXX University is my first choice for graduate study because I am not only a devout Catholic but also a fervent admirer of the Jesuit tradition. I am convinced that the election of history’s first Jesuit pope will help us to usher in novel and creative advances from a Catholic perspective on the ma…

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MSN Online Nursing and Health Studies, Missions

XXXX University is my first choice for graduate study not only because it is the finest MSN program available online, but also because of your Jesuit philosophy and tradition of placing those who most need our help as our highest priority. There is nothing that I am as proud of as I am my 6 trips to…

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DNP Africa, Immigrant Applicant, Cameroon

 1.) I am applying to the University of XXXX because I am convinced that your program is the finest DNP program available for an applicant with my specific interests and focus: on Africa. In my humble opinion, the greatest weakness of my application to your program is my age; I am 52. Nevertheless, …

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MSN, Clinical Care Extender, Arabic Woman

Just like my mother, I am an Arab woman, despite the fact that I have been in California my entire life. Thus, I look forward to contributing to the diversity of your distinguished program in nursing as a near-native speaker of Arabic as well as a young woman who is most passionate about and fully e…

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MSN, Cuban Applicant, Missions to Nicaragua

My application to your distinguished Master’s in Nursing Program at the University of XXXX is inspired primarily by my job as an ER nurse at the XXXX Medical Center in XXXX. I began serving here shortly after finishing my BSN Degree in May of 2012. Prior to that time, I spent more than a year here w…

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Doctor of Nursing Practice Degree, Education

Practice/Experience/Leadership: Out of my 16.5 years of nursing experience, I now have 14 years of progressive leadership experience in team development, staff retention programs and the maintenance, operation, and enhancement of patient services. I also earned my BSN (2006) and MSN (with a focus i…

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MS Clinical Nurse Program, Indian Applicant

A  hard  working  woman  who  was  born  and  raised  in  India, I have now  been living  in the United  States  for the  past  ten  years. I moved to the U.S. in 2002 after marrying a  U.S. citizen and have been living with my in-laws since that time. I am now the  mother  of   two  beautiful  boys…

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Masters Nurse Anesthesia, MSN, CRNA

No day is ever the same for me because my greatest joy in life is learning, finding my deepest satisfaction in progress, improvement, and life-long education. And it is this passion for becoming an increasingly successful nursing professional that is my greatest gift and strength. I trace this passi…

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MSN, Masters Nursing, FNP African American

We are pulling ourselves up by our own bootstraps as a family. I am a young African-American woman and the oldest of 4 children born to my single mother. I focus much more on the merits of learning responsibility while still young, growing up as an assistant mother as well as a child, than I do on a…

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MSN, Masters Nursing FNP, Africa, Kenya

In Arizona, it is necessary to hold the RN qualification and a degree in a health related field in order to apply for an Advance Practice Nursing program. The Specialties available are: Nurse Practitioner/Clinical Nurse, Nurse Anesthetist or RNP in Acute Care Setting. The amount of required clinical…

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Nursing Residency, Diversity

I was born and raised in Indonesia. I lived in Germany for four years before moving to the United States in 1991. I expect to graduate with the Bachelor in Science of Nursing degree in August of this year. I speak English, German, Indonesian and Javanese. My goal is to become a very effective, and h…

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Nursing Masters, CRNA, Latina, Bilingual

I am applying to XXXX’s CRNA program because I am convinced that it is one of the finest programs in the country and its location is convenient for my family and my career as a nursing professional. I have extensive experience in the importance of pain control, having spent years as a nursing profes…

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MN, Masters Degree, Advanced Clinical Nurse, Saudi

I am a nurse in Saudi Arabia who is dedicated, motivated and very much wants to study abroad so as to better prepare myself for advancement in my field. I am especially favorably impressed with your MN Program in Advanced Clinical Nursing and I see it as the best fit for my interests in learning how…

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