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GMSN Non-Traditional, Hospice, World Traveler

XXU is my first choice to study towards the MSN because I love the progressive aspects of your curriculum which mirror the creativity and sense of promise in diversity and humanity that generally characterizes the Bay Area. My academic work ethic is high as is demonstrated by my undergrad GPA of 3.7…

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PHD Doctor of Public Health Nursing, African

I am currently finishing up my Master’s Degree in our Nurse Practitioner Program at XXXX University. I have a special emphasis in my studies on adults, most particularly our geriatric population. My compassion for my patients, and the older they are the more that I love them, is matched only by my a…

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MSN, ANP, Cardiology, Russian Immigrant

I am a Russian woman from Latvia and a nurse who has now made her home in America. At 32, I feel strongly that I am now at my optimal point for a return to full time study in my field. My main area of interest is cardiology and I a looking for a way to give something back to my community in this are…

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MSN Public Health Education, Multiracial Latina

I am a young woman who has recently finished my BSN. Half African-American and half Puerto Rican, I have celebrated multicultural diversity my entire life, especially since I was a military child and we moved around constantly. I completed my BS in Public Health at XXXX University in 2005 with a foc…

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BS Nursing, Chinese Immigrant

Seven years ago, I moved to America from China at the age of 15. Thus, my adulthood so far has been taken up by becoming a Chinese American rather than simply Chinese, and becoming a mother.  Now, I want very much to become a nurse.

I was not inspired to become a nurse until I saw all these nurs…

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DSN, Doctor of Science in Nursing, Latina Nurse

I am a woman of Puerto Rican ancestry who was born in New York. Since late adolescence, I have been dedicated to my career in nursing, completing both my BSN and my MSN at XXXX College. Now 41, I am a nurse who has time to develop a great deal of passion about patients, and to have strong feelings a…

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Masters FNP Multilingual, Russian, Spanish

My main goal in life is to make a positive difference in people’s lives by applying my significant nursing experience and to do so while having a satisfying and rewarding career which will provide both variety and autonomy. I am convinced that the FNP role will meet my requirements and maximize my a…

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MSN Education & Leadership, Africa

My goal in life is to make a positive difference in people’s lives and I seek to do so by applying my nursing experience while enjoying a satisfying and rewarding career which will provide both variety and autonomy. I am convinced that the FNP role will meet my requirements and maximize my ability t…

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Masters CRNA, Active US Air Force Reserve, ICU

am an active US Air Force Reservist and, for the last four years, I have worked as a qualified flight nurse in an Air Force Aero-medical Evacuation Squadron. In my civil nursing career I have undertaken a very wide variety of roles since qualifying in 1996.  I now seek to apply and extend my signifi…

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Masters CRNA, ICU Experience, Medical Missions

I am applying to your distinguished program because nothing satisfies me as much as seeing a smiling face prior to surgery; and the calm serenity of a confidant patient following surgery. Still only 26 and with 8 years of ICU nursing under my belt, my application to your competitive program is stren…

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MSN Masters FNP, Rural Health

I was inspired to become a nurse by my daughter Catherine who survived a liver transplant at 4 years old. A highly disciplined and hard working nurse, I have extensive experience in acute, critical, and emergency room settings at teaching hospitals. My philosophy of nursing is to find the individual…

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BSN-to-DNP Degree, Family Nurse Practitioner

My response to entering middle age has been to advance in my career. I look forward to contributing to the lovely diversity of your program at XXU as a woman who was born and raised in Iran; while I will always be Persian, however, I have been here so long that I already feel Oklahomian. I became an…

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MS Masters, Post-Surgery, Vietnamese-American

After graduating from XXXX State with my BSN in Nursing, I began my career with XXU Health on a floor that specializes in post surgical patients, especially those with traumatic injuries. I was nervous but very eager to learn. Taking care of patient’s physiological, psychological and spiritual needs…

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Masters, CRNA Nurse Anesthesia, Husband and Father

I would feel profoundly honored to complete my Masters Degree in Nurse Anesthesia at XXXX College’s highly respected program. I am applying to your program primarily out of respect and admiration for your central goal of creating student-centered partnerships with clinical sites. Another factor is t…

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WHNP Women’s Health Nurse Practitioner, Filipina

I had a really good time in nursing school in general; but nothing else excited me as much as my course in women’s health. This is why I have my sights set on becoming a distinguished WHNP and I hope to perform all of my clinical work in this area. I have complete confidence in the distinguished fac…

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Masters FNP Letter of Intent, Hospice, Spirituality

Your distinguished MSN Program at XXXX University is my first choice for graduate study to become a nurse practitioner because I want very much to attend a school with a solid spiritual foundation and ethos. My dedication to nursing as a spiritual activity, healing and care as an expression of love …

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Masters, ANP Adult Nurse Practitioner, Portuguese

I want to become a nurse practitioner because nursing is my life and I want to advance in my career, becoming the finest ANP possible. I do not spend much time on facebook; when I am there, it is usually to share experiences with other nurses. At least with the exception of my daughter, my top prior…

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DNP, Nursing Leadership and Education, Peru

I spent the first 27 years of my life in my native Peru, where I made my first degrees in nursing. 22 years later, now 49 and partially Americanized, I yearn to prepare myself for career advancement in nursing practice education and to eventually return to Peru as an expert in this area. I am convin…

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Masters CRNA, Nurse Anesthesia, Filipino & Chinese

Born and raised in Manila, Philippines, I am a young man and a nurse who is three quarters Filipino and one quarter Chinese. One of four siblings, I grew up in a tiny, humble home in one of the most impoverished slums in Manila, far from the city lights. We were happy despite the fact that 15 people…

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MSN Masters, Military Nurse, FNP Healthcare Mgmt

I am applying to your distinguished program at XXXX University because I see it as the best fit for my high level of motivation and extensive professional responsibility. I also feel strongly that my personal nursing philosophy is well aligned with the mission of your program with respect to diversi…

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