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MSN, Cuban Applicant, Missions to Nicaragua

My application to your distinguished Master’s in Nursing Program at the University of XXXX is inspired primarily by my job as an ER nurse at the XXXX Medical Center in XXXX. I began serving here shortly after finishing my BSN Degree in May of 2012. Prior to that time, I spent more than a year here w…

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Doctor of Nursing Practice Degree, Education

Practice/Experience/Leadership: Out of my 16.5 years of nursing experience, I now have 14 years of progressive leadership experience in team development, staff retention programs and the maintenance, operation, and enhancement of patient services. I also earned my BSN (2006) and MSN (with a focus i…

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MS Clinical Nurse Program, Indian Applicant

A  hard  working  woman  who  was  born  and  raised  in  India, I have now  been living  in the United  States  for the  past  ten  years. I moved to the U.S. in 2002 after marrying a  U.S. citizen and have been living with my in-laws since that time. I am now the  mother  of   two  beautiful  boys…

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Masters Nurse Anesthesia, MSN, CRNA

No day is ever the same for me because my greatest joy in life is learning, finding my deepest satisfaction in progress, improvement, and life-long education. And it is this passion for becoming an increasingly successful nursing professional that is my greatest gift and strength. I trace this passi…

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MSN, Masters Nursing, FNP African American

We are pulling ourselves up by our own bootstraps as a family. I am a young African-American woman and the oldest of 4 children born to my single mother. I focus much more on the merits of learning responsibility while still young, growing up as an assistant mother as well as a child, than I do on a…

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MSN, Masters Nursing FNP, Africa, Kenya

In Arizona, it is necessary to hold the RN qualification and a degree in a health related field in order to apply for an Advance Practice Nursing program. The Specialties available are: Nurse Practitioner/Clinical Nurse, Nurse Anesthetist or RNP in Acute Care Setting. The amount of required clinical…

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Nursing Residency, Diversity

I was born and raised in Indonesia. I lived in Germany for four years before moving to the United States in 1991. I expect to graduate with the Bachelor in Science of Nursing degree in August of this year. I speak English, German, Indonesian and Javanese. My goal is to become a very effective, and h…

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Nursing Masters, CRNA, Latina, Bilingual

I am applying to XXXX’s CRNA program because I am convinced that it is one of the finest programs in the country and its location is convenient for my family and my career as a nursing professional. I have extensive experience in the importance of pain control, having spent years as a nursing profes…

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MN, Masters Degree, Advanced Clinical Nurse, Saudi

I am a nurse in Saudi Arabia who is dedicated, motivated and very much wants to study abroad so as to better prepare myself for advancement in my field. I am especially favorably impressed with your MN Program in Advanced Clinical Nursing and I see it as the best fit for my interests in learning how…

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MSN, Masters FNP, Family Nurse Practitioner, Iran

I was awarded my BSN by the University of Phoenix in 2010 with a GPA of 3.8 and received the Dean’s List award.  I am therefore confident of my ability to successfully complete the Master’s program, I always seek to excel in anything that I undertake and certainly intend to apply myself fully in ord…

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MS, Masters Nurse Anesthesia, African Man

I was born and raised in a rural area of Ethiopia. Growing up, I soon became highly cognizant of the huge health problems that burdened our community. By the time that I was in High School, I was already dreaming of becoming a nurse, so that I could help the people in my community who were suffering…

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MS, Nursing Masters, Palestinian Woman, NP

I would like very much to attend your program leading towards the Masters Degree in Nursing because your program is exceptional in quality and location. I wish to become a highly professional nurse practitioner because of the intense joy that I find in helping others, especially those who are sick. …

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MSN, Nursing Anesthesia, African-American, ICU

Having spent the last two years working as a Nurse Clinician IM in an Intensive Care Unit, I have become highly adept at learning and fulfilling numerous supporting roles as a nursing professional working under pressure, with those whose life tetters on the brink and each decision can easily be a qu…

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Nursing Residency, Navy, Veterans

 

 

The Navy has been a part of my life since I was born; indeed, I was born in a Naval Hospital.  Growing up on naval bases, I was proud of my dad and his service to our nation, and the strong sense of community emphasized by the military lifestyle.  He willingly gave his entire career to t…

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