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DNP Studies, Psychiatric, Crisis Intervention

My goal for DNP studies at XXXX University is to be the finest DNP possible. I am currently serving as an RN on a psychiatric unit working with patients in acute crisis. Raised in a family of humanistic and holistic healers, the daughter of a nurse educator, and the sister of a nurse midwife—my fat…

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Doctor of Nursing Practice, Nurse Anesthesia DNP-NA

Having completed an undergraduate degree in Flute Performance, I like to think that my background in music has helped me to cultivate creativity, dedication, perseverance, and to learn to prioritize at an early age—all qualities that have been instrumental so far to my success in nursing. Adaptable,…

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CRNA Masters, Korean-American, Army

 I feel that one of the greatest benefits of being a professional nurse is the gratification that comes from easing the suffering of others. I have focused on anesthesia because I want to devote the balance of my professional life to this cause. I am a US Army Captain and serving my country is my f…

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MS Masters, Post-Surgery, Vietnamese-American

After graduating from XXXX State with my BSN in Nursing, I began my career with XXU Health on a floor that specializes in post surgical patients, especially those with traumatic injuries. I was nervous but very eager to learn. Taking care of patient’s physiological, psychological and spiritual needs…

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Masters, ANP Adult Nurse Practitioner, Portuguese

I want to become a nurse practitioner because nursing is my life and I want to advance in my career, becoming the finest ANP possible. I do not spend much time on facebook; when I am there, it is usually to share experiences with other nurses. At least with the exception of my daughter, my top prior…

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MSN Masters, Military Nurse, FNP Healthcare Mgmt

I am applying to your distinguished program at XXXX University because I see it as the best fit for my high level of motivation and extensive professional responsibility. I also feel strongly that my personal nursing philosophy is well aligned with the mission of your program with respect to diversi…

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MSN Online Nursing and Health Studies, Missions

XXXX University is my first choice for graduate study not only because it is the finest MSN program available online, but also because of your Jesuit philosophy and tradition of placing those who most need our help as our highest priority. There is nothing that I am as proud of as I am my 6 trips to…

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MS, Masters Nurse Anesthesia, African Man

I was born and raised in a rural area of Ethiopia. Growing up, I soon became highly cognizant of the huge health problems that burdened our community. By the time that I was in High School, I was already dreaming of becoming a nurse, so that I could help the people in my community who were suffering…

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Letters of Intent for Nursing School: Doctoral, Masters, Certificate

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Working together as a team we strive to create the best personal statement possible, to give you an advantage over other applicants to Nursing School. I am an experienced professional who has read and edited thousands of  Personal Statements and Statements of Purpose. Most editing services only focus on the technical aspects of the statements: grammar, spelling, and punctuation. Instead, I consider the more important aspects; personal tone, flow, and content. Most importantly, I help you express your creative ideas with respect to your long term goals and your contribution to humanity and society. The final product of my editing may be the beginning of your professional success, a solid investment in your future.